topic: the principal is the most important person in the school.
I do think that the principal is the most important person in the school. the frists thing is because I think that they will make everyone feel safe Because they are the people who run the school and make up what the school will do and how they will do it. They also make the school days out and what days we have are muftis days. Sometimes they are important because they will have meetings with people and they will get rid of the people who have been bad or done something bad. my reasons that I think this is because I think that they are good and get rid of the bad kids. So that is my I think that the principal is the most important person in the school.
Kia ora Danni
ReplyDeleteGreat effort following the OREO format for persuasive writing! I like how you remembered to restate your opinion again at the end. I would like to see you taking the time to re-read and ensure that all your sentences make sense. Most of them do, but a few muddled up can distract from the overall impact of your persuasive paragraph!
- Miss Birtch