This is just to say
I have bronke
Vase that were filled with keys
and which
you were probably
Made at me with
Because there went everywhere
Forgive me
they were colorful
so nice and
so pretty
Monday, March 2, 2020
this is just to say
hi today blog is about what i did in my home room it is a poem i hope you like it if you do tell me thank you and if something is wrong tell me that to
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Awesome poetry Danni. I enjoyed hearing about your 'worst thing'! You had all the lines in the right spots to keep the integrity of the format.
ReplyDeleteI would like you to have another look at the introduction. There are no capital letters or full stops and I know you can do better than that!
- Miss Birtch