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Friday, June 15, 2018

my poem

Miss McCormick

Happy nice smile blond hair
Baby blue eyes as light as the sky
Mint chocolate breath
Move fast as lighting
Touch of ice
Carries a bag of happiness

Her voice like an angel says let me take  you away

9 comments:

  1. hi it is mattisin I like how you did miss McCormick she is my fav teacher

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  2. i danni i like you poem good job

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  3. i really enjoyed this because you really told me about her
    to make this even better you could ad more adjektives
    i remember when i was learning about how to make a poem in year 1 or 2

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