Hi the people who read my blog I what to show you what i have done in my CIP week 5. I have done some things about the All Blacks I have done a chart that have three things on it here it is I hope you like it.
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, August 21, 2019
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1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Danni
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your work from CIP today. In your DLO I want you to be clear with your spelling. There are a few mistakes that I know you could correct with some editing. Also, some of your facts for "What I Know" are the same was "What I Found Out" ... it is important to be clear with your organisation.
- Miss Birtch