Miss McCormick
Happy nice smile blond hair
Baby blue eyes as light as the sky
Mint chocolate breath
Move fast as lighting
Touch of ice
Carries a bag of happiness
Her voice like an angel says let me take you away
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
good job danni
ReplyDeletei agre
Deletehi it is mattisin I like how you did miss McCormick she is my fav teacher
ReplyDeletethank you mattison
Deletegreat work
ReplyDeletei danni i like you poem good job
ReplyDeletewow amazing
ReplyDeletethe persion sounds amazing
ReplyDeletei really enjoyed this because you really told me about her
ReplyDeleteto make this even better you could ad more adjektives
i remember when i was learning about how to make a poem in year 1 or 2