on Tuesday we went to the reuduton tour and there was a guy and his name was reggae and he was the guy that was the talker of the show and he was a trpoin player and he ply the song lazs and the song let it go and then he played kik do you love me and then some girls whnt up onn the stag and where danicing to a song and then tow girls sang an song
i will fins this on my onyb time
Friday, May 31, 2019
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Hey Danni,
ReplyDeleteI like how you added the girls dancing into the blog. I enjoyed the girls dancing as well but I mostly enjoyed Reggies story. Maybe next time you coukld check your speelling. For the Title maybe change it to the Revolution Tour.
Chloe
Kia ora Danni
ReplyDeleteI think that your buddy Chloe offered you some really great feedback about your spelling. Some of these key words were on the board to help you with your blog post. Also, if yo use your spell check some of the meanings of your sentences might be more clear :)
- Miss Birtch